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 Post subject: Peeta's death ~ Sorry Peeta lovers
PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 12:00 am 
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I want him to die. Please note, I haven't read all of CATCHING FIRE. :) Enjoy, sorry Peeta Lovers. Note I didnt really put much into it.

Katniss stared out the window, looking at her surroundings. It was early morning, and awful quiet. She wasn't worried, she just kept looking out of the window, watching the day. Where's Peeta?, She thought. Peeta completely left Katniss's mind as her thoughts jumped to Gale. Katniss knew he was out in the woods, hunting to provide food. After Katniss thought it would be a nice, peaceful morning; She watched an arrow from a bow shoot in the air. Soon after, she heard a loud thump and a wail. PeetaShe thought.
She darted out off the house, forgetting to put on shoes. She ran and ran, Peeta probably got stuck with the arrow. She wondered where it hit him and how hard. Breathing heavily, she finally reached the place where Peeta was laying on the ground. Katniss wondered why he was out in the woods anyway. She bent down on her knees, touched Peeta's face, and cried.
"Peeta!" Katniss cried.
Peeta didn't answer but she seen he was still breathing. She needed to talk to him, help him so she doesn't let him just die. Gale walked over and grabbed Katniss's sholder as she noticed he had the bow to the arrow.
"YOU!" She yelled throwing his hand off her shoulder.
"I'm sorry Katniss." Gale yelled back but she was to busy with Peeta.
"Is, is he going to live?" She cried.
"Probably," Gale paused. "Not."
"Katniss, it's okay. As long as I get to spend my last moment with you." Peeta reasurred her.
"No, it's not okay. Is there anything I can----"
Peeta stopped her there at the word 'can' and kissed her. He kissed her as long as he can, this was his good-bye. Katniss could feel he wasn't going to be her any longer. Before she knew it, Peeta's head dropped and he was gone. Gale had left as soon as Peeta kissed Katniss.
"Peeta.." Katniss cried. "He's gone!"
****
Gale knocked on Katniss's door. She opened it and slammed it.
"Katniss please open up." Gale pleaded.
"No, you didn't help when he was dying!" She said through the door.
"Well, I would have if you weren't macking all over is face!!" Gale said. "You could have tried to get help but no..."
"Jealous?" Katniss said opening the door.
"No!" Gale lied.
"Okay, sure..."
"I'm sorry, why was he even in the woods anyway!"Gale said.
"I, I don't know." Katniss put her head down. I cant believe he's gone.

Gale paced around, he felt guiltly he killed Peeta. It was an accident. What was Peeta in the woods for anyway? From the far distance Gale was in, Peeta looked like an injured animal, which was an easy target. Of course, untill Gale noticed the injured animal was really Peeta, he had no idea. Katniss would keep this on Gale's shoulder. He really hoped Katniss wouldn't tell anyone, but the arrow was still lodged in Peeta, full of proof. Gale gulped, This should be fun he thought.


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 Post subject: Re: Peeta's death ~ Sorry Peeta lovers
PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 12:34 am 
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Well... I have no idea what just happened in that story. Lol. Gale shot Peeta... Katniss got mad... now she's sad. Okay. A bit confusing as to why he shot Peeta in the first place. But I'll take it. I kinda hate Peeta and want him to die, too :P
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"Katniss, it's okay. As long as I get to spend my last moment with you." Peeta reasurred her.
^That quote sounds so Peeta-like, and is why I dislike him.

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 Post subject: Re: Peeta's death ~ Sorry Peeta lovers
PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 10:38 pm 
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HoppingInTrees wrote:
Well... I have no idea what just happened in that story. Lol. Gale shot Peeta... Katniss got mad... now she's sad. Okay. A bit confusing as to why he shot Peeta in the first place. But I'll take it. I kinda hate Peeta and want him to die, too :P
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"Katniss, it's okay. As long as I get to spend my last moment with you." Peeta reasurred her.
^That quote sounds so Peeta-like, and is why I dislike him.

Yeah It does. I don't know why he shot Peeta. Lol... I just want him to die...


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 Post subject: Re: Peeta's death ~ Sorry Peeta lovers
PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 3:07 am 
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That was slightly confusing and disjointed but I couldn't keep from smiling. I was kinda hoping that Gale had killed him on purpose. >:)

(Sorry Peeta lovers (which I sometimes am and sometimes aren't...ish) , I'm Team Finnick. But I'm not a Gale fan either so don't get all po'd.)

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 Post subject: Re: Peeta's death ~ Sorry Peeta lovers
PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 7:53 pm 
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YAY! Peeta dies!!!!!! I really wish Gale would of been good, though, I LOVE him :)

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 Post subject: Re: Peeta's death ~ Sorry Peeta lovers
PostPosted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 2:35 am 
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Being a male I can't really be a Team Gale or Team Peeta fanboy. I mean I could, but I'm not. But for all the Team Gale people/ Peeta haters they're loving this. XD

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 Post subject: Re: Peeta's death ~ Sorry Peeta lovers
PostPosted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:48 am 
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That was confusing. Gale shot Peeta coz he looked like an animal (lol) and Katniss hears Peeta fall down in the woods all the way from her house?! Then Katniss gets sad then angry then slightly amused at Gale's "jealousy". lol You really really want Peeta to die, don't you?

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 Post subject: Re: Peeta's death ~ Sorry Peeta lovers
PostPosted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:57 pm 
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Why did Gale kill Peeta? If he wanted to hurt Katniss, I understand, but otherwise...anyway, I don't like Peeta either, i can just imagine Peeta acting all heroic before his death as a last impression...ugh. good overall though.


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 Post subject: Re: Peeta's death ~ Sorry Peeta lovers
PostPosted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 11:14 pm 
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I'm Team Gale but my only problem with this is that I actually want Peeta to end up with someone else that he loves in the end. I love Peeta, but I love Gale more, I think because I'm so much like him.

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 Post subject: Re: Peeta's death ~ Sorry Peeta lovers
PostPosted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:47 am 
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wut tha heck?????
[color=#BF0000]LOL
I LUV GALE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!
notice how only Gale fans hav replied to this fanfiction
ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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 Post subject: Re: Peeta's death ~ Sorry Peeta lovers
PostPosted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 12:28 pm 
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OK, I'll be the first Peeta fan to rely to this. :P

First, I thought it was hilarious. I should write what each person thought. BTW, I'm not flaming. Don't take this seriously. I REALLY DID find it funny XD.

GALE: Hey look, an injured animal that walks on two legs. I bet it isn't a person. I'll shoot it. XD
Katniss: What in the world was that? (runs for a very long time) I'll assume it's Peeta because he gets hurt very badly in each book XD. OH NO! It IS Peeta! (gets sad)

Gale: Oh, crap. It is a person! I need to hide the body. XD CRAP! Katniss is already there. Oh, and whoop-de-do, it's Bread Boy.

Peeta and his cheesy thoughts: I love Katniss, I love Katniss, I love Katniss, Oh crap I'm dying, but it doesn't matter because I love Katniss. XD (and YES I am a Peeta fangirl) This arrow is really hurting me, but I love Katniss.

(Peeta Dies)
That was my favorite part actually, when he dies.

I do really think you just wanted him to die, didn't you. I want to write his death now.^^ I'll go do that.

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